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2021-01-30T13:10:51+00:00
今天刷逼乎看到类似的问题,给我印象最深的应该是姑获鸟还有最近的一本新书 钢铁,火药与施法者,截一小段给大伙看看。[img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202101/30/ekQ8fo5-ekupK2bT1kSg0-sg.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202101/30/ekQ8fo5-duhzK1fT1kSg0-sg.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202101/30/ekQ8fo5-e7otK2bT1kSg0-sg.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202101/30/ekQ8fo5-gxhbK21T1kSg0-sg.jpg.medium.jpg[/img]
冒牌大英雄的开头还可以
总之最好写的就是一场战役的一次小战斗开始,既有紧张刺激可读性,又可以间接地引入世界观细节
[quote][tid=25342256]Topic[/tid] Post by [uid=61515905]快乐的小徐[/uid] (2021-01-30 21:17):
今天刷逼乎看到类似的问题,给我印象最深的应该是姑获鸟还有最近的一本新书 钢铁,火药与施法者,截一小段给大伙看看。[img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202101/30/ekQ8fo5-ekupK2bT1kSg0-sg.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202101/30/ekQ8fo5-duhzK1fT1kSg0-sg.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]./mon_202101/30/ekQ8fo5-e7otK2bT1kSg0-sg.jpg.medium.jpg[/[/quote]喵的,怎么图片顺序不对,我明明按顺序发的
黑天魔神的《宿主》,看到前几章男主妹妹身上长着黄豆大的虱子我就决定追了[s:a2:doge]
就是这一段,给我印象极其深刻[s:ac:哭笑]
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Reply to [pid=489483905,25342256,1]Reply[/pid] Post by [uid=60218293]baize042[/uid] (2021-01-30 21:27)好看是好看,可惜结尾太仓促了[s:ac:哭笑]
黄金三章有个锤子用,用第一章(2000字内)抓住读者眼球的书才算合格
[quote][pid=489488925,25342256,1]Reply[/pid] Post by [uid=60445784]白墨橙[/uid] (2021-01-30 21:54):
黄金三章有个锤子用,用第一章(2000字内)抓住读者眼球的书才算合格[/quote]实际上我们举的例子也都是第一章,只不过用的黄金三章名头,你也举个例子呗[s:ac:茶]
贩罪[s:ac:哭笑]第一章就很出人意料
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黄金三章可以看看西红柿?的吞噬星空,按地球篇的水准写开头,总会有一口饭吃
回到明朝当王爷前三章就是教科书级的黄金三章。阴差阳错混成九世善人可太有趣了,牛头马面作弊安排主角回到明朝当王爷,一睁眼却是家里穷得叮当响又很让人好奇他后面怎么当上的王爷,不是地府的安排出错了吧。
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[quote][pid=489492773,25342256,1]Reply[/pid] Post by [uid=39089145]luo860611[/uid] (2021-01-30 22:16):
有一说一,诛仙。。[/quote]别说三章,诛仙前3卷最喜欢了