好诗啊“他们是为我而死”

[quote][pid=494594773,25613116,1]Reply[/pid] Post by [uid=15130335]飞云隐月[/uid] (2021-02-20 15:26):

想得太多，记得画手群体对乌合麒麟评价，很有才华就是谄媚当局

作协态度只会比这更激进[/quote]这画手群体不会是浪国画师圈吧[s:a2:doge]

[quote][tid=25613116]Topic[/tid] Post by [uid=62485575]清都无我-策梦侯[/uid] (2021-02-20 11:11):

[img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Q8g07-k7ylKoT3cSj6-bp.jpg.medium.jpg[/img]

除了没有韵脚，论物象堆叠，情绪铺垫，情感升华，都是一等一的好诗啊[/quote]头像还是个色图

这写的是个蛇皮啊[s:a2:怒]

热搜了，老色批出圈儿了

营长 我疼
[s:a2:哭]

比姓贾的那个丑女人强多了。。。 建议进入作协

贾浅浅出来挨打[img]http://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_201209/14/-47218_5052bc835856c.png[/img]

我觉得其实只是朴实的叙事吧，只是感情和生活挺真实的

多用了一个为什么，其他确实可以

[quote][pid=494592979,25613116,1]Reply[/pid] Post by [uid=42844977]百世快递[/uid] (2021-02-20 15:19):

比姓贾的那个丑女人强多了。。。 建议进入作协[/quote]想得太多，记得画手群体对乌合麒麟评价，很有才华就是谄媚当局

作协态度只会比这更激进

[quote][pid=494594689,25613116,1]Reply[/pid] Post by [uid=43030842]GamingTZ[/uid] (2021-02-20 15:26):
多用了一个为什么，其他确实可以[/quote]感觉用"他们为什么会死"就行

[quote][pid=494595173,25613116,1]Reply[/pid] Post by [uid=41575776]虐人反被爆[/uid] (2021-02-20 15:28):

这画手群体不会是浪国画师圈吧[s:a2:doge][/quote]大部分还真是……

诗词技巧什么的不谈了......
胜在感情真挚，比一帮子废话诗人、乡村诗人强太多了
莫名想起了舒婷的《风暴过去之后》，虽然其实关联不大

嗯，比贾浅浅强多了。能当教授[s:a2:doge]

你是谁？为了谁？
我的战友你何时归
我不知道你是谁
但我我知道你为了谁

好诗？不过是叔叔吃人血馒头的通稿罢了[s:ac:反对]
[img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-koaeK2iT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-hduK2lT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-x3tK2eT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-1gh7K2dT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-38htK2lT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-jez4K2oT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-kqh8K2sT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-1eqK2nT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-5j6tZbT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-699vZcT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img]

lsp的崛起

[quote][pid=494596945,25613116,1]Reply[/pid] Post by [uid=36992559]绯影汐岚[/uid] (2021-02-20 15:35):

好诗？不过是叔叔吃人血馒头的通稿罢了[s:ac:反对]
[img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-koaeK2iT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-hduK2lT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202102/20/-7Qj00-x3tK2eT1kShs-12i.jpg.medium.jpg[/img][img]./mon_202102/20/-7Qj0[/quote]就算是通稿也是好诗啊

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