把做的恶梦修饰了下,写了个小短篇

my name laith nice to meet you-avatar

my name laith nice to meet you

2021-11-15T16:53:51+00:00

逻辑上很有点乱,也没推敲语言可能不少病句,将就看看[img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202111/23/ekQ17d-jj1iZeT1kShs-12i.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202111/23/ekQ17d-js1dZhT3cShs-12i.jpg[/img][img]https://img.nga.178.com/attachments/mon_202111/23/ekQ17d-63bmZgT3cShs-12i.jpg[/img]
BeardedAkuma-avatar

BeardedAkuma

不明觉厉
Shurik-avatar

Shurik

功底不错啊,写过小说没?
这个故事没写完吧,至少我没太看懂。